Wednesday, November 5, 2008

When I See U....

Wrote this awhile ago..in september...thought id share



When I see u I see more than wuts on the outside.
I see the passion that u hold within.
I see the dedication and determination of someone who has limitless potential....
I see someone, who like me, had to grow up fast and learn how to be independent early.

I see the gentle, loving, and caring person that's within.
I see someone who cares for others and sacrifices for them...
I see someone who holds things in but knows how to let things out...
I see someone who can make me smile without saying a word.

I see more than wuts on the surface....
where others see shallowness in u I see depth...
I see the deep thoughts that pass thru ur mind.
I see nothin but the best for u...
I see more n u and for u than I can say.

Do u see it too??? I wonder...

9 comments:

ShawnQt said...

wow!
speechless.

Umm are we still on for tonight, lol just want to knwo!

thegayte-keeper said...

I C IT 2...

Jackson said...

Loved the poem. When I first saw the eyes, I thought about Obama. Sorry, I have him on my mind.

~jackson

Q said...

Wow....

Darius T. Williams said...

*snaps*

hot stuff

slimm215 said...

(snaps fingers in the air) I see it. I see it and loving it. but can't help but wonder if you were lookin in the mirror when you wrote this? hmmmmmmmm

deonte' k said...

Great poem man. Really good!

jerzey_reality said...

y didn't anyone tell me my nose was shining brigher than the flash on the camera lol

@shawn:
speechless huh....lol..yeah we are/were still on..hoped yall enjoyed the food cuz u know I forgot about it lol

@gayte-keeper:
lol...thas wassup

@jackson:
lol...obama...ok

@Q:
ill take that as a complement lol

@darius:
thanx...tryin to get into the habit of sharing

@slimm:
thanx...but nah wasn't lookin n the mirror..but that does give me an idea

@deonte:
thanx

fuzzy said...

There is something about wondering! What if we are looking through things wearing cloudy glasses called Love? Do you think it can alter our logical judgement? Or maybe it causes us to judge things logically...